Post: #1
Title: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: zaytoona
Date: 09-15-2003, 11:16 AM
Something in me understands the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses. In your most frail gesture are things which enclose me, or which I cannot touch because they are too near. Loved, … but feared because the closeness creates a sense of familiarity that I am wary it will kill the excitement that triggers my body and soul when I feel your presence within my surroundings. Like a rose in the spring, whom Athena had chosen to open....little by little, .....and petal by petal,.... your love springs within me. Like fingers around the neck of a loved one from their lover, ….the sweetest sense of suffocation one can feel, ….your love brings to me.
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Post: #2
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: bushra suleiman
Date: 09-15-2003, 01:07 PM
Parent: #1
كلام جميل وصعب ان يترجم الظاهر عليكى شاعره بس الجماعه ديل ماجايبين خبر يازيتونه،شكرا لهذه الرقة والدفء
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Post: #3
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: bushra suleiman
Date: 09-17-2003, 12:16 PM
Parent: #1
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Post: #4
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: zaytoona
Date: 09-19-2003, 08:26 AM
Parent: #3
Thnx Dear Bushra, glad that u understood my little piece of writting, sorry 4 z late reply though, i hardly come online now adays, n hardly write even...may b it's 'bout time i went back 2 school, eh?? hehehehe
i'll b back soon, tryin 2 write, but my mind refuses to provide with somethin that's to my liking, so i'll b patient and wait on it may b somethin will b born by the moment.
luv...
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Post: #5
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: willeim andrea
Date: 09-19-2003, 08:48 AM
Parent: #1
الاستاذه الاديبه زيتونه .. زي ما قال الاستاذ ... انتي شاعره والناس ما جايبه خبر... الي الامام... وانشاء الله نشوف انتاج متدفق ومتواصل حتي باللغه ديك .. ... تعرفي .. استوقفتني تلك الكلمات كثيرا... هل يتملكنا الحب بذاك الدفئ والخجل والعمق والتردد .... من شي او شخص قريب جدا وبدون ... فجاءة .... وبدون مقدمات .. ان نتحسس ... او ... نتخوف من المصارحه... قد يكون هذا الحب العميق في النطاق الضيق الذي حولنا وهنا يصعب التصديق لمفاجئة الاستيعاب او ما شاكله ..... للقلب ما هوي وصدقيني انه شعوري شرعي .. جميل .. لذيذ .. ان نحب ونذوب في من نحب وهذه سنة الحياة بل كل الحياة ولكي مني كل التقدير والامتنان علي تلك القطعه الرومانسيه ..... والي الامام
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Post: #6
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: HAMZA SULIMAN
Date: 09-19-2003, 09:22 AM
Parent: #5
ذى زيتونه
ولون اللون الفجر البدرى
ذى زيتونه
وكيف ما كيف
لا نحس لا ندرى
انقسمت بانه
ورقصت فرشت ريش الوانه
قدل طاووس الوهج السحرى
ذى زيتونه
جبت الدكشنرى واستهجيت وما خليت حاجه
لك التحيه
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Post: #7
Title: Re: Things I Cannot Touch Because They Are Too Near
Author: bushra suleiman
Date: 09-19-2003, 11:10 AM
Parent: #1
dear zaytoona, i know u can do it agian by commitment and willingness. hope u continue writing cos we miss this kind of true feelings. best wishes.
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