From the Antic Stone to Creatspace"AMAZON"

MY STORY

When I was sitting on an antic rock at the bank of river Nile ,near the temple and mountain of Alburkal, among the night, under the moon light ,at far north of Sudan ,beyond the palm trees , golding sand and the ashes of an ancient nation and state of Kush and Napata .where there was hidden a great wisdom of titanic kings and queens ,King Piye and his brave sons and daughters .I hear the whispers of my ancestors .They advise me that "Oh you patriotic and faithful grandson .It is your own task and duty to bring the wise grandsons from Diaspora over the whole world back to home land .For the sake of your people and clan .We are your treasure and gold .Tell them our stories of wise rule, equality and justice ,use your poetic eye, pen and papers". They gave me the key of truth and beauty. Hence the book of poetry and divan "Home Is Best".
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This is your history and heritage

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Congratulations Brother Adil for publishing your book.
I have been following your poems and want to encourage
you to keep writing.
I saw obvious mistakes in the description of your book
Home is Best.
It is always adviseable to get someone to point out
and correct mistakes (typos, grammar etc.)
BEFORE pusblishing any book.
Best Wishes
mustafa mudathir

Quote: It is always adviseable to get someone to point out and correct mistakes (typos, grammar etc.) BEFORE pusblishing any book. Best Wishes

thank you mr. mustafa mudather for your comments
i am trying my best to have a good book of sudanese poetry in amazon.but no one offer techincal help
so it goes like that for the first addition
let some sudanese ofer some help by buing the book first,because i am looking for evaluation of what written in the book more than earning mony after it.
this book is trying to imprve that sudan is a nation it is not a geographic location
buy the book and tell your friends all over the worldabout it ,then tell me is it fulfil that aim?

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