NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson

NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson


07-02-2011, 07:26 AM


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Post: #1
Title: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: adil amin
Date: 07-02-2011, 07:26 AM

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On that day
He passed away
That bird and dove
Of peace and love
Life is a game
Of lost and gain
Give and take
A piece of cake
Of salt and sweet
No more pain
No heart beat
That son and guy
Has passed and died
And the whole world
Was left to cry
Before telling us
Life is a horrible big lie
Of flocks of tiny fishes
Like you and me
In a deep sea
With dolphins and sharks
Of music and tones
Of Do Re Me
And Fa Sol La se
Can you see?
All this truth and beauty
Or I shall repeat it again
No more pain.

Post: #2
Title: Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: hassan bashir
Date: 07-04-2011, 09:24 AM
Parent: #1

A beautiful elegy Adil

Would look even better if you made slight changes to the following verses

Quote: Was passed and die
Leave the whole world cry


I am not a poet like you, but let me suggest suggest:

Has passed and died
and the whole world
was left to cry

Post: #3
Title: Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: adil amin
Date: 07-05-2011, 08:42 AM
Parent: #2

thank ypu hassan
I will convert the poem
take your ease i am not a poet too