Post: #1
Title: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: adil amin
Date: 07-02-2011, 07:26 AM
On that day He passed away That bird and dove Of peace and love Life is a game Of lost and gain Give and take A piece of cake Of salt and sweet No more pain No heart beat That son and guy Has passed and died And the whole world Was left to cry Before telling us Life is a horrible big lie Of flocks of tiny fishes Like you and me In a deep sea With dolphins and sharks Of music and tones Of Do Re Me And Fa Sol La se Can you see? All this truth and beauty Or I shall repeat it again No more pain.
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Post: #2
Title: Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: hassan bashir
Date: 07-04-2011, 09:24 AM
Parent: #1
A beautiful elegy Adil
Would look even better if you made slight changes to the following verses
Quote: Was passed and die Leave the whole world cry
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I am not a poet like you, but let me suggest suggest:
Has passed and died and the whole world was left to cry
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Post: #3
Title: Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson
Author: adil amin
Date: 07-05-2011, 08:42 AM
Parent: #2
thank ypu hassan I will convert the poem take your ease i am not a poet too
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