HOME IS BEST

Every morning
When I awaken
By" three little birds
Singing sweet songs"
On the tree
By the window
Of class room
In Tehama school
That my nest
I fall under a total recall
My soul and true sensitive-self
That never calm and rest
Ask me and I
Why you are here?!
Oh you lark and falcon
Is it destiny and fate?
Of love and hate
Or conflict of chair and seat
Of cross and crescent
Whether it right or wrong
Living here in Solomon silence
Like a wizard and monk
Can you make a request?
Life is a precious trade
That you should invest
Do you memories
Beautiful Nile, palms trees, burning sand
And golden corn harvest
Summoned your sprits
Before sun –set
Follow the old wisdom that said
"East or west, home is best

"East or west, home is best

welcome Altyb Rahma
WE HAVE TO RECONSTRUCT OUR OWN COUNTRY SUDAN

Dear Adil

Nice poem. Very soothing to read. Please continue posting your poems here.

"three little birds
Singing sweet songs"
This should be qouted, dear Adil, so as not to look like
plagiarized from Bob Marley's famous "song three little
birds". The rest of your poem is nice and lyrical. Keep
posting this stuff please.
Now allow me:
HASSAN BASHIR
I have been trying to reach you,man, to no avail. The messenger
is kaput, your profile has no email on it. I request that you
put in a new mainsheet the title of the last piece of criticism
that I wrote in your post "..translation of shawgi badri..".The title
for the piece is Who is Afraid of Anton Chekhov. Please and thank
you. You can use the same url for the post to lead readers to here!!!

dear Mustafa Mudathir
thank you for your nice comment
my e mail
[email protected]
you can follow all my poems in this link and do your best to evaluate them

Sudan Bookshop :HOME IS BEST
the post of wrote in your post "..translation of Shawgi Badri..".The title
this post is not mine check the name pls.

Quote: Dear Adil Nice poem. Very soothing to read. Please continue posting your poems here

thank you Hassan Bashir
you can follow all the poems in this link of Devan"HOME IS BEST"

Sudan Bookshop :HOME IS BEST

Thank you Adil,

Will certainly visit the link and come again with my feedback.

Dear Mustafa,

Quote: your profile has no email on it

My apologies.

As you can see, I posted a new thread on the critical approach as requested. I'll be the first one to comment and hope I will be joined by others there.

I would be honoured if you can write to me via [email protected] or [email protected]

Thanks Y hassan for giving your emails.
My intension was to have it on the same post. You just copy the same
url but name it "who is afraid of anton checkov".
The reader will be directed to you post "mustafa mudathir trans..."
but will find the critical approach at the botton. But now it's fine.
Do not change it as it would seem confusing. My aim was to have the
reader focussed and able to read the text and the critique.
My greetings to you Adil Amin.
Keep the good work.