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NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson

07-02-2011, 07:26 AM
adil amin
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NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson

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    On that day
    He passed away
    That bird and dove
    Of peace and love
    Life is a game
    Of lost and gain
    Give and take
    A piece of cake
    Of salt and sweet
    No more pain
    No heart beat
    That son and guy
    Has passed and died
    And the whole world
    Was left to cry
    Before telling us
    Life is a horrible big lie
    Of flocks of tiny fishes
    Like you and me
    In a deep sea
    With dolphins and sharks
    Of music and tones
    Of Do Re Me
    And Fa Sol La se
    Can you see?
    All this truth and beauty
    Or I shall repeat it again
    No more pain.

    (Edited by adil amin on 07-02-2011, 07:28 AM)
    (Edited by adil amin on 07-05-2011, 08:44 AM)

                  

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07-04-2011, 09:24 AM
hassan bashir
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Registered: 02-17-2006
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Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson (Re: adil amin)

    A beautiful elegy Adil

    Would look even better if you made slight changes to the following verses

    Quote: Was passed and die
    Leave the whole world cry


    I am not a poet like you, but let me suggest suggest:

    Has passed and died
    and the whole world
    was left to cry
                  

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07-05-2011, 08:42 AM
adil amin
<aadil amin
Registered: 08-01-2002
Total Posts: 36895





Re: NO MORE PAIN , To The Great Soul Of Michael Jackson (Re: hassan bashir)

    thank ypu hassan
    I will convert the poem
    take your ease i am not a poet too
                  

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