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My Father's House......
12-31-2011, 09:41 PM |
عائشة موسي السعيد
عائشة موسي السعيد
Registered: 07-10-2010
Total Posts: 1638
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My Father's House......
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Is this what is called 'The Love of Land'? Is this why it is 'Mother Earth'? Or why do I fret so much whenever the subject of 'my father's house' is brought up. We were never rich, but we had always had enough. Our house was built of clay when all the surroundings were built of hey. Our father, a teacher, was very fond of the piece of land he inherited from his father after financial settlements with other heirs. He filled the house with his beautiful voice, in the middle of the night, reading Surat Yaseen from the Qur'an. Our house then became the first house in the neighborhood built of bricks with neon lights and even a shower in the middle of the small room with a single tab called bathroom!
My father was transferred to other towns and finally to Khartoum the capital city. We lived in various government or rented houses; but NONE was like OUR house. Wherever we went, my father used to lie down with both hands under his bald head and sighs: I wish I can transport my house here! And whenever I heard this, I felt saddened for him and would repeat his wish silently. I wish I know what was in his mind….love of the land, memories of his father, love of his effort, sheer homesickness, or what? He died far away from our hometown, but his friends honored him by flying the coffin home and giving him a farewell visit to the house he loved. Years passed, a family gathering decides to sell the house as they need the money to buy their own houses in Khartoum. What about the man who bought and built the house? Sell his house? What about his grave? Sell that too? Yes, he can't take the house with him…but do we forget him? And his grave? No, sorry. You have to wait until I die and only then you can sell this piece of land! And forget about the grave! asha musa
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01-01-2012, 05:26 PM |
hassan bashir
hassan bashir
Registered: 02-17-2006
Total Posts: 1302
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: عائشة موسي السعيد)
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Dear Aysha,
Happy 2012
The story of almost every Sudanese household. The dedicated & nostalgic father and the greedy & "realistic" offsprings.
A very touching account of the struggle between the selfless and the selfish
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01-01-2012, 09:16 PM |
عائشة موسي السعيد
عائشة موسي السعيد
Registered: 07-10-2010
Total Posts: 1638
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: hassan bashir)
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Thank you Hassan... Wishing you and all here the best of 2012, hoping it stays a bit longer for us to be able to achieve something worthwhile.
Thanks on behalf of us here for commending our contribution in your post on the other side of the wall. I like the slow pace here. It gives you a sense of freedom and I come here to read and relax and contribute, when possible. There is a more intellectual touch to the writing here, while people go there for a chat or a bit of gossip beside 'concrete' writings which are a lot..
I agree with you about the fate our Fathers' houses..... It depresses me a lot not to be able to solve 'my' problem. It used to embarrass me to pray for money.... Now I do, may be I can turn this aging house in El Obeid into a school lke he would have loved it to be! Care to join in the prayers??
Again Happy Independence Day....Even if it is only a memory now!
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01-02-2012, 04:03 PM |
hassan bashir
hassan bashir
Registered: 02-17-2006
Total Posts: 1302
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: عائشة موسي السعيد)
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Thank you Aysha,
Quote: Care to join in the prayers?? |
I do, but don't you see that your prayers have already been answered? Judging by the way the story is written, I can confidently tell that he built a house and a school.
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01-03-2012, 10:27 PM |
عائشة موسي السعيد
عائشة موسي السعيد
Registered: 07-10-2010
Total Posts: 1638
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: hassan bashir)
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'O'O ... Looks like I have to write another story.... Did it sound like he built a school?
However, I told you I get embarrassed asking too much... even from God , although He encouraged us to. But we need 'think' of that school which father didn't build.
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01-04-2012, 06:49 AM |
hassan bashir
hassan bashir
Registered: 02-17-2006
Total Posts: 1302
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: عائشة موسي السعيد)
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Quote: Did it sound like he built a school? |
Come on Aysha. You know what I mean. The way he groomed you to end up writing such a fantastic story tells what kind of school he had already built. You are a graduate of that school and you should be proud of that.
If it is of any consolation, at least the discussion among your family members about your father's house is being done in a very civilised and, dare I say, democtaric manner. I know of many cases where "prodigal" family members take the matter into their own hands and impose a sort of fait accompli situation.
After your permission, i'll try to be "Forawi" here and translate the story into Arabic. Will show it you first before posting it anywhere.
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01-04-2012, 07:44 AM |
عائشة موسي السعيد
عائشة موسي السعيد
Registered: 07-10-2010
Total Posts: 1638
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Re: My Father's House...... (Re: hassan bashir)
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Come on Aysha. You know what I mean. The way he groomed you to end up writing such a fantastic story tells what kind of school he had already built. You are a graduate of that school and you should be proud of that *****************
Well...Thanks for the compliment, but believe me I didn't get the point. Isn't it enough to be a writer ? You want to make a philosopher out of me?
Thanks for contributing to the family hunshes' solution..but they are all great ..it is me who is pulling feet.
Play the Darforian part and go ahead with the translation..that makes me even prouder. As a matter of fact I am working on one of Ibrahim Ishag short stories and feel tempted to fly to Darfur as no earthly dictionary can solve this termenological problem, or is it dialectical in this case?
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