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To a flasher : by me!!!

04-20-2005, 11:40 PM
Maysoon Nigoumi

Registered: 03-04-2004
Total Posts: 492






To a flasher : by me!!!

    To a flasher

    He takes his turn round the corner
    Down the dusty road
    His feet had just began to know
    He marks his spot
    Eyes searching and finds
    -seeing me-
    his audience
    he looks around
    cautious
    OOOh! You know! You know!
    Why cautious so?

    He fumbles inside (so empty)
    he points his gun
    -I his target-
    and loads his gun
    he rubs his arms
    he fades inside
    I had not known IT was so black
    As IT glistenes,
    This runs in his head
    “GUN is what you see
    GUN is what I am
    If it would swollen
    Filling me, empty me
    I am not hungry! I wouldn’t eat!”
    Now it falls, limp!
    WITHDRAW ARMS!
    Echoing! Sleeping head* ask:
    Arms? What? What arms? No arms!
    Bent low, his head always low,
    Only in search of an audience
    It rose high
    IT rose high
    Only , when pointing a GUN
    In an unknown war
    With an unheard victory
    “I rage” he screams
    Yawning ears hear no sound
    “ I rage my life!”
    sleeping hands wave unseen flies
    “my name is X!”
    nobody asked who
    “I live in X, suburbs”
    nobody asked where
    “I was moved from x land”
    Nobody asked why
    “I lost the hand of my mother”
    “And dropped the grip of a small brother”
    Nobody asked how
    But I see him, does he know?
    I’ll sit and see you
    But let there be space between us
    No one knows these days
    They are watching out these days

    Drowsy eyes suddenly alert, whisper:
    “Who?”
    Them
    “better sleep then, close your eyes”
    where were we?
    It’s not where should I start
    But how…..
    why aren’t you at the girls school?
    “it is the holiday” he casually says
    his face suddenly sad
    “is there any good in me?”
    that hurts you not, but
    is there any bad?
    You shoot and know one sees
    You laugh and no one hears
    Worried “will I go to heaven?”
    I don’t know
    “Shall I ask the priest?”
    Oh, HE doesn’t know!
    “well, what’ll I do?”
    do you want to go to heaven?
    “ I want to embrace sand and never rise
    that is my heaven: oblivion”
    it is a good place
    “?”
    this your heaven, will they let you in?
    “I am its master”
    you deserved it….friend, you deserve
    always draw a door
    which will let you in
    O’city! City!
    “I remember a time when ma would look and see”
    “Had you had your tea?”
    “Give your brodda some bread!”
    “You fell and scraped your knee?”
    “Go early to bed!”
    “sister if I may?”
    you may
    “sister…I thank you”
    ?
    “you have called me you, they called me IT!
    And screamed”
    Brother if I may?
    “you may”
    brother remember
    “?”
    always want a door
    that’ll let you in.
    ***********************************
    * people of the board why is it whenever i write the word H E A D S, it is scraped out?
                  

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05-19-2005, 05:39 AM
Omayma Alfargony
<aOmayma Alfargony
Registered: 09-01-2004
Total Posts: 1434






Re: To a flasher : by me!!! (Re: Maysoon Nigoumi)

    Maysoooooooooooon

    That was wonderful

    your scalpturing views are so strong as if i was out there, so close, feeling your heart beatings.

    keep on...

    best of my wishes
                  

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07-13-2005, 04:56 PM
Maha_Mahmoud









Re: To a flasher : by me!!! (Re: Maysoon Nigoumi)

    you have quite a creative talent...nurture it and it may get you far...well done!

    (Edited by Maha_Mahmoud on 07-13-2005, 05:12 PM)

                  

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07-14-2005, 06:09 AM
Maysoon Nigoumi

Registered: 03-04-2004
Total Posts: 492






Re: To a flasher : by me!!! (Re: Maha_Mahmoud)

    thanks Omamyma and Mahas
    thanks again and again and again
    for reading
    maha? wow....creative writing? what is that? sounds AMAZING....i want to hear you more


    Omayma...dear,,,,the fact that you heard my heart beats, knowing that I was actually there , only shows that you are more poetic than me....how did you know?
                  

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07-14-2005, 11:56 AM
Maha_Mahmoud









Re: To a flasher : by me!!! (Re: Maysoon Nigoumi)

    What i am doing is a Creative Writing programme for people seriously committed to script wholly, and are practising or prospective authors in prose fiction, poetry, dramaturgy as well as other writing, mainly in combination with the performance arts. It's a very rigorous practical approach in which discussion of more abstract theoretical issues stem from an intensive engagement with works-in-progress. My work helps me to maintain contacts with agents, publishers and other bodies in the field by both reading and being read. It's writer's haven honestly in all that it manifests (language and literature -wise), experimenting, developing and attempting to write the magnum opus text that noone but you could ever write (i'm struggling but working really hard to get there!:). Being a Creative Writer is truly brilliant and loads of fun. I see you have it in you, the talent and the potential to write well. Maybe a Creative Writing degree wouldn't go amiss, if you want to have a shot at it!?
    All the best...and don't stop writing!

    (Edited by Maha_Mahmoud on 07-14-2005, 11:59 AM)
    (Edited by Maha_Mahmoud on 07-14-2005, 12:00 PM)

                  

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